Dramaturgical Script Notes

Best for:
Writers and directors looking for a clear, external eye on a draft.

Dramaturgy support focused on strengthening story, character and emotional logic while protecting the original voice of the project.

My approach to dramaturgy is collaborative and exploratory rather than prescriptive. I work to identify what the film is trying to do, where that intention is landing, and where it may be getting lost or diluted. Feedback is framed around clarity, escalation and emotional impact rather than rules or formulas.

What’s included:

• One full script read (short or feature)

• In-depth written dramaturgical notes

• Story, character and emotional logic feedback

• Structural and thematic clarity

Pricing:

• Short film (up to 30 pages): £2 per page

• Feature script: £2 per page

This service aims to help the story land more fully with an audience without flattening its complexity or ambition.